A place which... /A place where...
Recently I heard a junior high school student
define a drugstore as a "place where sells medicine."
Now just a minute, there's something wrong here. Please
look at these 2 sentences:
- A drugstore is a place which/that sells medicine,
toiletries, and other things.
- A drugstore is a place where they sell medicine,
toiletries, and other things.
Note: toiletries means things
that we use for washing (soap, toothpaste, shampoo etc.)
Do you see the difference? The sentences are very similar, but there is
a grammatical difference:
In Sentence 1, the drugstore sells the medicine and toiletries.
In Sentence 2, they (the drugstore's staff) sell the medicine and
toiletries.
We can add a third sentence:
3. A drugstore
is a place where you can buy medicines,
toiletries, and
other things.
Sentence 1 tells us what a drugstore does; Sentences 2 and 3 tell us
what happens in a drugstore, or what people do in a drugstore.
Let's look at some other examples:
- A bakery is a place which/that makes and sells
bread.
- A bakery is a place where people can buy bread.
- A hospital is a
place which/that
treats sick people.
- A hospital is a
place where sick
people can receive treatment.
A good coffee shop is a place which.../ where...
Sometimes, in
the middle of the afternoon, I like to leave the classroom and visit
one of my favourite coffee shops. I'm sure most of you have your own
idea of what a good coffee shop is. Here are some of my ideas:
- A good coffee
shop....
... sells good coffee, ... has friendly staff, ... keeps a good stock
of newspapers and magazines, ... plays nice, relaxing background music,
... gets very full at lunch time.
- In a good
coffee shop you can...
...drink coffee, ... have a cheap but tasty snack, ... meet people, ...
read the newspaper in comfort, ...take a break a break from shopping,
... forget about work for a while.
- Also, in a
good coffee shop...
... the coffee is always nice and fresh, ...the menu is varied, ...the
seats
are comfortable, the staff are friendly... there are a lot of nice
comfortable seats.
We could use
these ideas to make sentences like these:
A PLACE WHICH...
- A good
coffee shop is a place which sells good coffee.
- A good
coffee shop is a place which keeps a good stock of newspapers and
magazines.
- A good
coffee shop is a place which plays nice, relaxing background music.
A PLACE WHERE...
- A good
coffee shop is a place where you can drink coffee and have a cheap but
tasty snack.
- A good
coffee shop is a place where you can take a break from shopping.
- A good
coffee shop is a place where the coffee is always nice and fresh.
- A good
coffee shop is a place where the staff are always friendly and smile a
lot.
- A good
coffee shop is a place where there are a lot of nice, comfortable seats.
And I'm sure
you can think of many other examples.
Exercise
How many
sentences can you write beginning with A good bookshop is a place where...
or A good bookshop is a place
which....?
When you have
finished, click here to see some
of
my suggestions.
Try this with your friends (Pass
the bomb)
Here's a nice little
activity that you can do with your English speaking friends. You need a
kitchen timer and a small cloth bag.
- Make a group and stand in a circle.
- Set the kitchen timer to go off (鳴る)in a chosen time,
(e.g. 40-80 seconds) - this is the "bomb."
- Start the timer and quickly put it in the cloth bag.
- Say a sentence beginning (e.g.) A good language school is
a place which.../where... and pass the bomb to the person on your right.
- The next person makes a sentence: A good language school
is a place... and passes the bomb to the person on their right.
- The passing of the bomb continues until it "goes off."
By the way, you can use this game to practise almost any structure. I
use it a lot in my classes - try it. It's fun!
Click below if
you
want to try some of my other one-point lessons:
Bob's One-Point Weekly Lesson Archive
©
Robert E. Jones, 2006
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